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April Open in new Window. [ASR]
Dressed in dripping rags, but bearing bright promise
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Review of April  Open in new Window.
Review by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Words, this is an excellent form poem that emphasizes form. Wonderful imagery of April, the month of beautiful growing things.

Since I don't see a rhyme scheme or rhythmic pattern (syllabic form), I believe we have a free verse poem that was molded much like one molds a pottery bowl. Your word choices are a nice mix of extensive vocabulary and playfulness.

Thanks for sharing. You accomplished your purpose. Your poem looks like a rain cloud.

WRITE ON!
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