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 Storm Open in new Window. [E]
Haikus strung together into a full poem.
by H. M. Marie Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent poem, H. M. Marie! I like the concept of connecting haikus to create a larger poem.

We have something in common. My home state of Georgia in the US is noted for growing peaches. Peach trees can endure the extreme heat of summer and the freezing temperatures of winter in The South.

You maintained the 5-7-5 syllables of haiku structure, while amending the style slightly to tell the bigger story. You deal with some sadness early on, finishing on the positive note of a smile.

Nicely done! WRITE ON!
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