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Given: Jul 29, 2025 at 11:48pm
Length: 527 Characters |
523 w/o WritingML
Excellent poem, H. M. Marie! I like the concept of connecting haikus to create a larger poem.
We have something in common. My home state of Georgia in the US is noted for growing peaches. Peach trees can endure the extreme heat of summer and the freezing temperatures of winter in The South.
You maintained the 5-7-5 syllables of haiku structure, while amending the style slightly to tell the bigger story. You deal with some sadness early on, finishing on the positive note of a smile.
Nicely done! WRITE ON!
You responded to this review 07/30/2025 @ 5:58pm EDT
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