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Review #4828096
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Poetically Prompted Open in new Window. [E]
Sixth go around on Promptly Poetry Challenge
by WdC Birthday Sox Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sox!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge - soon to be PPC6 *Delight* I'm also here to deliver the 100th review on your poetry folder *Party*

Wow, what a clear and concise way of putting it. It's a haiku, kind of. When I saw the prompt, I assumed Lilli meant a poem of precisely 25 words. I didn't realize it could be fewer. You've captured so much here: decades of hard work, the cycle of life, raising kids, the finality and inevitability of old age, the way we think we're immortal until one day we realize we aren't, the difficulties of motherhood and the importance of gratitude, the commonality of the human experience... Probably a million more things neither of us realized.

What can I say? Well, the font could stand to be a bit bigger... You know I always say Size 4 Verdana *Laugh* it's ok if we blame Jack Author Icon for the advice *Wink* If there was a haiku contest or something similar, I'd recommend you drop this off there. As it is, I'm happy to find it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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