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 Why I Love My Aunt Open in new Window. [E]
She is truly inspiring, my Kalli Masi!
by THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sonali!

I'm here for I Write in 2025 *Smile*

Well... If I were Soldier Mike, I would tease apart your poetic form to see if you did it correctly! As it is, my eyes glaze over and I refrain from counting syllables in this weather!

Seriously, I love your theme. We all need at least one person in our lives who is kind and loving and creates a safe space for us to express ourselves in all our messy feelings. It's an important part of growth and gaining maturity.

I love the big cheerful grape-candy colored font you've used, it's engaging and emotive.

Glancing over the rules for the poem, I get an instinctive feel that you've succeeded in creating it correctly. At any rate, the expression of love and appreciation is sincere and heartfelt. I do hope you share these feelings with your aunt and let her know how much of a positive impact she makes in the lives of you and her family.

I don't say this often, because it usually comes to mind when I've run out of ideas for a sensible review, but would you consider setting this out in fancy script and printing it as a gift? You don't have to write it by hand; word processors can make gorgeous things these days. Your aunt would love it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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