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Review #4828581
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned!

Well, well! We've succeeded in completing the Promptly Poetry Challenge for 2024/5 *Delight* You are far more experienced at it than I - this was my first rodeo *CowboyHat* Hopefully not my last...

I love your spin on this... It reminds me of the meme "I need more space" with the NASA logo or galaxies. There's a certain wistfulness in releasing bonds and shooting for the stars, all by one's lonesome, but there's also a certain freedom in finally being free of a relationship that just wasn't working. (Wait, a freedom in being free... *Confused* My brain is melting *Laugh*)

So... Yeah. I'm at a loss, but Dave just sent me a review of one of my poems, so I can use that framework to guide my scatterbrain... The title we've been required to use here is fairly interesting. I can say that your structure and form are simple and suitable for the conversational yet solitary contemplation involved. Your narrative is strongly specific, with concrete details. My overall impression is of a bag of mixed emotions... Relief and also sadness.

Well done, and congratulations on completing the challenge *Party*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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