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Review #4828812
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Promptly 4, 5 and 6 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4, 5 and 6 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
by Beholden Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Tortilla!" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

Congratulations on completing your PPC5 challenge *Party*

Ah, now who doesn't love a taco? "You can't please everyone, you're not a taco" is a favorite phrase of mine... Do you know about Taco Tuesday? It's actually a thing in America. There was a kerfuffle over the years about trademarking the two words; some no name taco shops had claimed ownership of it, much to the chagrin of Taco Bell, who lobbied to have Taco Tuesday be a common use term. I just learned a couple days ago that they succeeded, and now Taco Tuesday is safe for everyone to use.

Looking at your poem, I can't resist thinking that in just the right British accent, all the lines would rhyme the same *Laugh* *Taco* yes, those tortillas are wonderfully versatile. The only thing I'm sometimes concerned about is the lime used in processing, but I think they're making lime free ones now.

A simple, matter of fact poem - what can I say? Precisely 25 words and conveys a tasty image *Hungry* Good work!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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