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 Forelsket Open in new Window. [ASR]
Dear to my heart, you are.
by zeni Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi zeni

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a good job with this item. The structure was particularly well done, and the flow and pace of the item was excellent. It was an all-around engaging read. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Sincerely,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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