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 Roses in the Rain Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem that takes a heartbreaking look at death.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem does a great job stirring the reader's emotions; touching on heartbreak and loss when someone dies.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and center the poem.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Now my hand held a single red rose, Standing bareheaded in the mist." I This is a nice, subtle description of a person holding a rose, alone, contemplating what was and what is to come.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening is subtle, gentle, and draws the reader in nicely. The title is a nice, teasing fit in regards to expectations for the poem. I enjoyed how the poem stirred up emotions. Well done!

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