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A Tragic Mix-Up Open in new Window. [13+]
Sometimes we should leave well enough alone. (Flash Fiction Winner)
by Jeffrey Meyer Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Jeffrey!

I noticed this on the sidebar and thought it looked rather dark and dreadful. I'm a sucker for reading what I'll later regret, so I clicked on it *Laugh*

This is super funny and relatable. The descriptions of the mess, the well-meaning husband and the wife's reaction to it is at once endearing and hilarious. I've never heard the phrase of infuriated agreement at the end, so learned something new from reading this. It's simple, to the point, yet vivid and clearly envisioned. In fact, dare I whisper, it sounds like a true story? *Shock2* *FacePalm*

I would suggest adding three relevant genres, such as Comedy, Experience, Food/Cooking, or Drama, or Relationship, or Home/Garden. This will help people find it when browsing and also help it have as many chances as possible for Quill nominations. Also, you might want to add a note in the subtitle that it's a flash winner, so we know it's good and it isn't overly long.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*
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