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 Need suggestions for names Open in new Window. [E]
Quick questions about names and pronunciations
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

To answer your questions first: have you tried a different spelling? Since it's a fantasy story, the names don't have to bear resemblance to real ones in this world. You could spell it Ayrene, or Arene, or Aireen, or Ayreen, or something properly phonetic as you would like it. Aerene? If you use the modified spelling you suggested, her nickname can then be spelled more phonetically, since people don't usually spell out nicknames anyway. Ayree?

Second question, I do like the invented name "octanium." I think this would be suitable for your team of eight.

On a different level, I hope to see more of your writing. This was an excellent tease!

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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