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Hi skellyjinx1

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job with the characterization and relationships in this story. The reader really gets to know who these characters are and effortlessly follows along as their attraction builds. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed this read. Nice job!


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