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 Too Many Questions of Love Open in new Window. [E]
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by ByHardAndSoft Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi ByHardAndSoft

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed this piece. I thought a lot of the questions that are posed are intriguing and really challenge the reader to think. It was an intriguing read. Well done!


Suggestions

I think the piece could have benefitted from a bit more variance in the line construction (perhaps longer and shorter questions) for the sake of variety, but that's a relatively small quibble with an otherwise compelling piece.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read. Nice work!


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