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 stary eyed and discontented Open in new Window. [E]
a poem about the fear of a lover realizing you're only human
by Shannie Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Shannie

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a great job illustrating a struggle that I think a lot of people have, wondering when the people we care about realize we're flawed and just as human as anyone else. Well done!


Suggestions

No suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Nice work!


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