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Wiccan Queen Open in new Window. [13+]
A Gothic poem
by W.D.Wilcox Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem about the Wiccan Queen.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Wicked spooky. I was totally freaked out.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 5 stanzas and an ABAB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Great use of WDC ML to increase the font and jazz it up. It really added to the ambience of the poem.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "while a chain of yellowed dragon’s teeth, rattles across her jet-black crest." The poet uses a good economy of words to succinctly describe how our wiccan queen looks all the while giving us the spooks. It's an eerie description that one can easily visualize and it makes the skin crawl on the arms. Well done.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening starts off subtle and draws the reader into the Wiccan queen's spell. The title lets the reader know what to expect. This poem will totally creep you out!

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