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 Still Standing  Open in new Window. [E]
Still Standing
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Theactual Treasure

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really enjoyed the staccato rhythm of this piece. I thought the structure was really effective, and accentuated the theme of the piece that reinforces the narrator is a scrappy personality who is persevering.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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