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Sibyl Open in new Window. [E]
a sassy black mermaid, 622 wods
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings *Smile*

I discovered this quirky piece using the Random Read and Review button.

It's a cheeky, kid-friendly sort of myth, inspired by the Disney live action reimagining of The Little Mermaid. I like how it's rooted in an earthy, realistic setting, right down to the town and state and geography. If the setting and narrator is autobiographical, it's nice to meet you. I don't know if I've even read your bio since I've started reviewing your poetry as part of PPC5. Oh, congrats on finishing it!

The theme is universal and greatly appreciated, though I honestly don't think another message begging us for peace would do much. Also, what reasoning is behind the idea of everyone having black mermaid DNA? Is it a symbol of unity and a nod to our ingrained mystical instincts?

Cute and fun, I enjoyed it *Mermaid*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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