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A Meadow's Path Barely Trodden Open in new Window. [E]
free verse romantic story-poem of remembrances walking through a meadow on a Spring day
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was about a walk through the woods and experiencing the beauty of nature.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the use of colors to paint the scenes in the poem. Good use of the five senses to place the reader in the poem. I felt like I was taking the stroll as well.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make the poem easier to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The meadow sings its floral melody in tune with chickadees. I breathe in the green fragrance of waving grass." The poet uses a good economy of words to paint not only the scene, but to tap into emotion. I felt happiness being surrounded by the vivid scene and crisp, clean, light scent of grass. Well done. Nice expression.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader to go along the walk with them and keeps them engaged. There's a lot packed into the poem. I also especially liked the stanza about the buck and doe and how it used the description of them to bring out a lingering romantic feeling in the reader. The title is a nice fit for the poem. The poem promises to resonate with the reader, especially if they go on a nature hike.

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