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 The Zeroth World Open in new Window. [E]
A journey of spiritual death & rebirth through the eternal struggle of light and darkness.
by Tani Ilves Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Tani Ilves

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I like the worldbuilding and the detail in this piece. In only a few short paragraphs, you were able to paint a really vivid picture of the journey the character is on. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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