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Code Talkers  Open in new Window. [13+]
Two Navajo Marines go into battle.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Steph!

Please excuse the template, it's ahead of time, but I'm just testing it out *Smile*

I really enjoyed this quick story; it has action, danger and tension without any gore, and it's rooted in history. We see the Navajo soldiers "up close and personal" as they perform their duties, supporting their fellow soldiers in the war. I remember reading about them in my history books, but it's always exciting to "see and feel" things, like watching a movie. I like the flow and the setting descriptions, and find it easy to understand (sometimes war stories can be a bit technical, with the guns and ships and whatnot...)

I would suggest moving the prompt, activity and word count info to the bottom of the page, perhaps in a dropnote. That way, we can get right into the story and avoid potential confusion of the datelines.

Thanks for sharing, take care, and keep writing *Heartt*
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