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Paws Open in new Window. [E]
A plea from fur-babies to humans
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Kazi!

I hope you'll enjoy the WdC partying next week... I'm breathlessly excited *Delight*

Animals are so important to the human experience and for the Earth's wellbeing; if it weren't for animals, humans wouldn't even be here, really. They give us so much: love, joy, exercise, food, clothing, companionship, and providing a balanced ecosystem for our survival, besides glorifying our Creator and leading us to give thanks for His infinite creativity.

We see here a furry creature, most likely a dog or cat, personified, or given a voice. They plead with us to treat them kindly and care for them as fellow Earthlings, promising a sweet reward of unconditional love. So many dogs and cats are abandoned each year, it's heartbreaking. You have given us a poignant reminder to do our best to help out those creatures of God who cannot speak for themselves. The way one treats animals is highly indicative of quality of character... (Although sometimes one hears about Mafiosos who love animals... *Think*)

Your font size and style is easy to read, and your poem has a nice rhythm with different types of internal and external rhymes, flowing smoothly without being forced into a stiff, potentially awkward or limiting form structure. I would recommend adding a third genre such as Environment, Nature, Philosophy, Animal, or Relationship. This will help others find your poem when browsing and will also allow as many opportunities for Quill Award nominations as possible (for all the scoop on those, check out the portfolio of Jeff-o'-lantern 🎃 Author Icon)

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Heartt*
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