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Something About the Rain Open in new Window. [18+]
What the rain did to Velda
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi thereBdragons

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this piece. I thought you did a good job conveying the details of the narrative using dialogue only, and the particular speech mannerisms you chose were well-implemented and gave the piece a distinctive style. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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