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Writing.Com in Wonderland  (E) a celebration 25 years in the making! Come step into Wonderland for fantastic prizes! #1266628 by iKïyå§ama-Happy 25th!

and Kisa's cool activity!


As I've yet to not like something you've written, this was an easy choice. I knew I'd be pulled in to your rhymic ramblings, and I was. For some reason (skill--no doubt!) your words never descend into the sing-songy-ness that drives me crazy (er- lol).

A parent/grandparent is hard-pressed not to have these thoughts when holding a child. Even as much as we wish to see for certain that all will be well in their life, we know that they will long outlive us and we have to simply hope.

Favorite lines? Have to be the promise of the last four lines in the poem.

~fyn