Hello, and good morning to you! I clicked on the "Read and Review" Section, and your fictitious story, "The Liver Pump," popped up. Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can offer my opinion on how the story sounds and make corrections so that your story will sound better.

I found your story to be interesting. I have learned something about the medical field when you brought up the subject of liver pumps. You talked about a marathon runner at the age of 78 who felt herself as being younger when she had gotten one installed. Her hair became darker at the roots. She regained her vigor. She felt like she was 39 again. I felt happy; I felt like I wanted to be celebrating with them.

I hope that you will be blessed with miracles of health, friendships, thoughts, memories, and much love to last your whole lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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