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 Red Shoes Open in new Window. [E]
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Review by Fyn-dragon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Whew! Legs are tired! LOL.

Welcome to Writing.com :)

Loved this poem. Especially ---> Toulouse swirls ink with absinthe’s fire <---this!
Super image!

I also particularly liked
She stumbles through the gypsy streets,
where riddles churn and laughter cheats.
Crooked rhymes and chameleons bright
mock the day and haunt the night.


~fyn
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