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Given: Sep 3, 2025 at 8:45am
Length: 440 Characters |
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This is an excellent poem, especially the ending stanza. More specifically, the lines
where the umbilical cord is breaking,
where mother is always waiting,
for the day,
her son will return, from lands far and away,
This poem has a lot to 'unpack' (so to speak) and is layered and nuanced. It is one of the ones that invites, almost demands (!!) a second, third, and fourth reading! Go you!
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