Hi!

Overall, "The Magic Carnival" is a charming tale that effectively combines adventure, learning, and imagination. It encourages children to embrace challenges and believe in themselves. Given its strengths and minor areas for improvement, I would rate it 4 out of 5.

Takia's character is well-developed, showcasing her curiosity, excitement, and struggles with division. Her journey resonates with children who may face similar challenges in learning.

The story conveys a strong message about perseverance and the rewards of hard work. Takia's determination to solve the math problem to gain access to the carnival reads as insipirational.

The blend of reality and fantasy, especially with the carnival being a dream (or not), adds a magical touch that appeals to young readers.

That said, at times the pacing feels uneven, particularly during the math problem segment. While it emphasises Takia's struggle, it could benefit from a more dynamic flow to maintain engagement.

And, a very minor point, I noted at least one small typo, there may be others - "familiar site of her room" (sight)

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .