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Summertime Open in new Window. [13+]
A favourite song of my Daughter and myself. Written for "Sound And Vision Contest".
by Brenpoet Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hey, Bren! I came across this item in your port and decided to leave you a review.

I've not seen / heard all of "Porgy And Bess", but I have heard a couple of selections and this is one of my favorites. The words fit the scenario perfectly and, as you point out, Ella and Louis do a great job.

It's cool that your daughter not only played the recorder, but was also able to play a song you both loved, and it's great you were both able to share that with audiences. It's more than a little sad to note how you were both right about those lyrics, though.

Regarding your story's format, I see you opted to center the text. I seem to recall you like doing that with your poetry, too; at any rate, it works just fine here. The last line truly does capture the feel of a long summer's day, and I'm glad you were able to take comfort from it at that sad time.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

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