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 Twisted White Open in new Window. [E]
What color are you?
by Colorless Peace Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Colorless Peace Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a good job with this item. In particular, the repetition and structure of the piece really help accentuate the imagery and your perspective. Nicely done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this poem. Good work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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