Hello! I am here to answer the prompt for "Space Blog" . This will also be a WDC Superpower review.

I do like to see cover photos as they add to the appeal of the item you are writing. A photo would work with the title and the description to help draw the attention of potential readers. Perhaps you could find some free clip art online of a haunted house to attach to your poem here.

I am able to clearly pick out the rhyme scheme. The rhythm feels a little bit off to me. I can't quite put my finger on it though. When reading it aloud, the rhythm doesn't sound right to my ears. It could just be me.

I didn't notice any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. I can't think of anything that would improve this poem other than maybe fixing the rhythm if possible.

Overall, I enjoyed your poem. It describes a haunted house well and takes the reader into the scene. Thanks for sharing this with WDC. Keep writing.





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .