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The Adventures of a Cursor and Writer Open in new Window. [13+]
Short Story to tie in with my Blog
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Amare Jane Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I enjoyed reading this piece. The relationship between the narrator and their writing interface was well depicted and engaging. I definitely felt the narrator's plight as they consider embarking on a writing effort.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Well done!


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