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elven ranger updates with pandora's prophecy
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings!

I discovered this by using the Random Read and Review button.

A handy thing to have around: quick character sketches to keep everyone straight as you write. I know this is for your own use... Perhaps you should make the folder private so people don't stumble in and wonder what's up with a fragmentary note of this sort. For all I know, you may have some invisible info here, using the {hide}{/hide} function. I have never yet used that option, but I see it might be useful. If this is all there is, I might suggest adding more info: what purpose does this character serve in the story? Are they just a figure, or do they play a role in moving the plot forward?

Best of luck with your fantasy project! It looks like a lot of fun *Delight*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*



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