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 Loving A Ghostly Promise Open in new Window. [E]
Loving someone who was never real and just empty promises. All make believe
by Emberly Gray Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Emberly Gray Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I liked the structure and the imagery in this poem. I thought it was well written, evocative, and really did a great job of capturing the reader's imagination. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable, well-written poem. Nice work!


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