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 haunted. Open in new Window. [E]
the scrapes left behind
by WanderingTrader Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, and welcome to writing.com!

Well... You've picked quite a gloomy subject for your opening item here. I identify with this a little too much, honestly. But I suddenly remember a very beautiful and wistful song: "days turn to years, turn to stories we tell about all of the good times and times that were hell..." Let me embed it:
You Were Loved, OneRepublic (acoustic) ▼

If you are the narrator, and this feels like your life, remember, whatever did happen, you probably were loved as much as someone could at different points in your life. Memories are there to give us an identity, to remind us of what makes us who we are and guide us forward to a future where more love awaits.

This is written is a heartfelt way, and every word rings true. I love how the subtitle looks like a typo until we reach the end and realize what the "scrapes" are. It could have been "scraps." Etched glass is an art form. It uses acid to fog the surface in patterns. Sometimes, the hurt feels meaningless, but it will always form a pattern. You can make it mean something.

I hope to see more of your work in the future. Enjoy your time here.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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