Hello,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really like the message of this piece. I thought the poem was well-constructed, well-written, and evocative. Your imagery was particularly good. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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