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Coldwater Creek Open in new Window. [E]
Life in the Wilderness
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First impression: A very atmospheric poem with good, concrete imagery.

Opening: The name "Coldwater Creek" is very evocative.

Ending: Completes the meditative last-line repetitions of "bones" and "hearth."

Suggestions: The only place I stumbled a bit was "Young cubs could from hiding;" the lack of a verb there was puzzling to me and seemed out of place with the other lines.

Overall: I especially liked the repetition here, as well as the vivid images. It paints a clear picture of the wilderness. And the poem is well-formatted and easy to read.
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