Empty Spaces

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It was my belief that you'd fufill
All of my desires
Now i see the threads that hold you
As they hold me now
Caught in the web of our past
Our future becomes a tomb-


Lonely indifference binds my solitude
Broken empathy seals my tomb
The helpless hours engulf me
Torn in two and thrown asunder
Tendrils of hope fade from light
Alseep in the pit of blind dispair
Awakening to death

The bright light of love
Proud and defiant
Signals hope
Death is indifferent to loves petition-