Winter Snow

winter snow poem for power reviewers contest

REWRITE
walking in the snow
inviting winter activities
noticing the beauty
taking in all the joy
enjoying the sounds muffled
remembering my childhood

seeing a place for a snow man
snow makes a perfect snow ball
one small snow ball formed
lets have a snow ball fight!
fight over starting to build

crafting a large snow ball
then more large snow balls
placing one onto another
Mr. snowman appears

snow falling again
cleaning the air
snowman white

sledding down hill
walking up again

winter snow is fun


ORIGINAL
walking in the snow
inviting winter activities
noting the beauty
taking in all the joy
enjoying the sounds muffled
remembering my childhood

seeing a place for a snow man
noticing the snow makes a perfect snow ball
one snow ball formed
Wow! lets have a snow ball fight!