*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Creative fun in
the palm of your hand.
Printed from https://www.Writing.Com/view/1907195
Printer Friendly Page Tell A Friend
No ratings.
Rated: 18+ · Folder · Action/Adventure · #1907195
NaNoWriMo entry for 2012. It is very rough. Had very little time to actually write it.
Mark Rathman meets a fellow long distance bicycle tourist in Nicole Crowder. This story covers their adventures riding together.

I think this story has some potential but at this point I'm more interested in getting overall reviews of this. I know there are a lot of glaring issues with the writing itself. I will take the time to address those in time. There are more general story issues that need to be taken care of.

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 1  (18+)
Mark and Nicole meet at Ragged Point, CA
#1907196 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 2  (18+)
Introducing Nicole's Dad Nick Crowder
#1907197 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 3  (18+)
Continuing the ride with Mark and Nicole
#1907199 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 4  (18+)
The couple reunites.
#1907200 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 5  (18+)
Jailhouse visit.
#1907202 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 6  (18+)
Decision made.
#1907203 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 7  (18+)
Driving to Lake Tahoe.
#1907205 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 8  (18+)
Meeting Maman
#1907207 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 9  (18+)
Back on the road.
#1907208 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 10  (18+)
Lunch time doing time.
#1907222 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 11  (18+)
Bicycle Tour reality sets in.
#1907223 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 12  (18+)
Yvette talks Nick into seeing the doctor again.
#1907224 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 13  (18+)
Tough couple days on the road.
#1907225 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 14  (18+)
Infirmary staff give Nick more drugs for his pain.
#1907226 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 15  (18+)
Nick is released.
#1907227 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 16  (18+)
Riding across western Canada
#1907228 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 17  (18+)
Vacation prep for the Crowders
#1907229 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 18  (18+)
Touring the upper great lakes.
#1907231 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 19  (18+)
Nick and Yvette head on out
#1907245 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 20  (18+)
Dog attack on the road
#1907246 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 21  (18+)
Yvette and Nick get pulled over
#1907247 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 22  (18+)
Mark returns home
#1907248 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 23  (18+)
Basketball showdown
#1907249 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 24  (18+)
Heading to a family reunion
#1907251 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 25  (18+)
Pleasant family meal but Nick freaks out.
#1907253 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 26  (18+)
Rainbow bridge showdown
#1907254 by Pico ヨハネス

 The Shadow Sleeps Chapter 27  (18+)
Nick finds peace
#1907257 by Pico ヨハネス
PORTFOLIO
Portfolio -> The Shadow Sleeps
Log in to Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!
All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!
Printed from https://www.Writing.Com/view/1907195