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Since March 21, 2018
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Hey! I am kind of a young writer, but I am looking for some feedback. I've done a couple of short stories but 'Winter is my first attempt at a full length novel. Feel free to comment your opinions and let me know if ya'll would like to have the rest! Be aware that some of my work cuts off in odd places. This is because I haven't really established where chapters begin and end (I would love feedback on that) and the fact that 'Winter should be read as a whole. (The whole file was too large to upload in its entirety. I have been hesitant to share my work in the past but I am very excited about this particular piece. I might post poetry too.
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    Rated: E · Death · #2172159
    Of Life and Seath
    Rated: E · Dark · #2171687
    "Her Halo is Broken"
    Rated: 13+ · Entertainment · #2153172
    Get legally married in Texas if you introduce someone as your partner 3 times. WC: 622
    Rated: E · Family · #2153049
    it is hard to stay positive when everything you get excited is criticized by friends/fam
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152989
    Part 6 of many. "A dove’s last cry, And silence settled, Dusted records" -
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152988
    Part 5 of many. "I had a dove, and the sweet dove died" - Keats
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152987
    Part four of many. "She must weep or she will die" - Tennyson
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152986
    Part 3 of many. (Does anyone hate Amber yet I'm genuinely interested)
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152984
    Part 2 of many. (Part of it is different POV. Hope it's fun)
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #2152981
    First of many. File was too large to up load on it's own. Hope readers enjoy
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