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I have been writing ever since I could hold a pencil. This is my first attempt at a manuscript for publication. I submitted my manuscript last year, and was told I needed to rewrite the beginning with a stronger hook. I recently completed the rewrite and was told I needed to join a critique group, and that my hook still wasn't strong enough, so here I am. Please help.
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