So... I'm not going to post bits and pieces of Awaysick anymore. I'm going to organise the whole story again and, starting with the prologue, actually write it in order. Of course, there will be a little bit of repetition, and there may be a few small changes. However, I think it's just better if I stop this and write the story properly. That way, I can actually finish it!
I really hope you read the real Awaysick, and it will be available at www.writing.com/authors/awaysick