As I walk along my secret path,
thinking secret things
and humming secret songs,
a thought occurs to me.
But due to my secret nature
and my superb secret-keeping abilities,
you shall never know it.
Still in school and writing for the fun of it, I would really appreciate any tips, criticism and ideas you guys can give me on how to improve my writing. Also, if you only want to express your thoughts on my stories, they would be just as much appreciated.