Portfolio: kybaby40

I'm only 21, so there's not really much to talk about. I started writing my series in 8th grade, The Heroes. I've finally completed the first book, but have a lot of editing to do, and I'm beginning to put the second one on here (don't read it until you've read the first one) and I do hope you enjoy reading them as much as I did writing them. Please leave some feedback whether its bad or good, I prefer a harsh critique as to make my writing better so let me know how I can improve my writings.