I am a begining writer. I would like to write Science Fiction and Children's stories. I have one of each written out. 'Macha's Day' is one. I would like any feedback on that. I would like to get my 'foot in the door' on being published. Though I have grown up loving Sci-fi, I love good stories (especialy any that have animals). For now the only thing I want to do well, is raise my children, so they will have good lives ahead of them.