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Since April 8, 2008
Hi i haven't written in a while so my style is sorta rusty/bad but ive started again and hopefully i can get better. =] Please read it and review. If you could tell me how I could improve i would be greatly indebted.
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    Some Story ch. 5  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1439403
    REALLY short and pointless.
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    Some story ch. 4  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1419773
    another stort chapter.
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    Boom  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Sci-fi · #1412964
    my first attempt at sci-fi but mainly just rambling. really short.
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    Some story ch. 3  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1412875
    yay hes duke....yeah just random stuff...i like this chapter the best
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    sarah's story ch. 3  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Sci-fi · #1411626
    first two chapters: http://zeyth.deviantart.com/art/My-story-chapters-1-and-2-68861248
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    Some story ch. 2  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1411540
    really short continuation. =]
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    Some story ch. 1  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1411523
    i havent written anything for years so my style is sorta rusty criticism is always welcome
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