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After 39 yrs of reading stories, I finally have the guts to write them. I have 3 audiences in mind as I write which will be reflected in my stories; my kids who love the fantasy/action/adventure stories in which kids are always the heroes, my soon to be wife who enjoys nothing more than reading a great love story (with a certain amount of smut) and lastly myself; Horror/Comedy/Thriller/Suspense, I have no specific genre. It's just about a good story. Hopefully the fact that I have zero grasp on the rules of grammar will not scare too many people away. I hope you enjoy, but if you don't, please let me know why. I don't mind harsh criticism.
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    Rated: E · Writing · #2017899
    Does this style work? Going between first and third person. All critiques are welcomed.
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