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Since January 24, 2007
200 Community Recognitions
My ultimate goal is to write children's poetry; any advice in that genre would be greatly appreciated. I don't post a lot of my children's poems on this site. My writings here are simple, rhyming, and are easily understood by most readers. I do appreciate constructive criticism, even down to the last comma, period, or any other nitpicking thing you can find wrong with my works.
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    Rated: E · Family · #2033945
    A mom now understood
    Rated: E · Contest · #2013310
    They always fib for fun.
    Rated: E · Folklore · #1957079
    A beast was lurking in the darkness.
    Rated: E · Folklore · #1923939
    The leprechaun knew secrets there . . .
    Rated: E · Fantasy · #1921453
    He hid behind a lilac bush . . .
    Rated: E · Nonsense · #1895487
    They strolled along the ocean sand . . .
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1761197
    A superhero with a peel!
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1847903
    A toddler is spending the day with his grandparents.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1757361
    Their bank accounts were full of cash
    Rated: E · Religious · #1751865
    He healed the sick and helped the poor
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1847698
    His life has taken a sudden twist.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1837766
    According to science, Pluto is no longer considered a planet. Says who?
    Rated: E · Contest · #1828974
    At one time a town could celebrate Christmas without any complaints.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1823019
    A young hummingbird's plight.
    Rated: E · Other · #1853050
    The audacity of a thief!
    Rated: E · Nature · #1813625
    Another birthday by herself
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1400624
    When will he ever learn his lesson?
    Rated: E · Family · #1840108
    She was my everything.
    Rated: E · Nature · #1735649
    She peers around an aspen tree...
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1665657
    She fell in love and paid the price.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1538712
    Many are happy to have a baby around the house.
    Rated: E · Children's · #1600201
    The mind of a young child
    Rated: E · Children's · #1610855
    I took it to class and showed the teacher.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1607137
    A Martian girl searches for true love
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1654119
    Something peculiar in the patients mouth!!!
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1723799
    I saw the beast...
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1716330
    They reminisce about the "good old nights"
    Rated: E · Parenting · #1374196
    An early morning encounter between a mom and her baby.
    Rated: E · Animal · #1505736
    A bat has fallen in love with a butterfly.
    Rated: E · Family · #1629482
    A poem written through the eyes of a lady.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1619698
    He spewed his loving words but left me in shame.
    Rated: E · Animal · #1398624
    He wasn't very fast and couldn't jump logs.
    Rated: E · Children's · #1357153
    A feisty little tyke decribes his first day of school.
    Rated: E · Family · #1546523
    The kind you want to wrap in your arms.
    Rated: E · Animal · #1551771
    I know it's quite cold but don't bother me.
    Rated: E · Other · #1517810
    A common occurrence around my house.
    Rated: E · Animal · #1521471
    A poem about a loving dog and his owner
    Rated: E · Religious · #1412229
    No tainted words or corrupt leaven.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1222076
    A humorous look at a common marital happening.
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1645785
    Could they be together?
    Rated: E · Comedy · #1219495
    A silly poem about the love between two woodland creatures.
    Rated: E · Emotional · #1402271
    A mother's love and devotion to her children.
    Rated: E · Relationship · #1218422
    A love lost after many years.
    Rated: E · Family · #1367692
    Two beautiful girls full of fire
    Rated: E · Other · #1639077
    I'm sure she'll get what she wants
    Rated: E · Nature · #1393403
    A peaceful place of calming life.
    Rated: E · Other · #1641092
    The swarm was now moving across the field.
    Rated: E · Holiday · #1359015
    A man doesn't want to celebrate Christmas this year.
    Rated: E · Holiday · #1908145
    It's time for special guest to visit.
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