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Cracked Circle of Life PLEASE CRITIQUE  Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
Cracked Circle of Life --- I am seeking honest critique ----
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Cracked Circle of Life PLEASE CRITIQUE  Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
Strengthened POV of the explorer, with dialog - Please Critique
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Peace Out Open in new Window. (E)
History of the peace sign
revision of Origin of the Peace Sign
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 To Survive Open in new Window. (E)
second draft of possible YA non-dystopian story set during an Ice Age = PLEASE CRITIQUE
more details on the wolf pack also the daughter upon the hunters return
I'll see what I can do. After all, you were one of the inspirations that got me working again.
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Young-Adult Readers & Classics, Really? Open in new Window. (13+)
Some surprising stories you wouldn't normally connect to these classic authors
Are you looking for Holiday Stocking Stuffers?
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Peace Out Open in new Window. (E)
History of the peace sign
so, Peace Out, man!
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Cracked Circle of Life PLEASE CRITIQUE  Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
Critiques welcomed
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Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
please critique
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 To Survive Open in new Window. (E)
second draft of possible YA non-dystopian story set during an Ice Age = PLEASE CRITIQUE
PLEASE CRITIQUE will award 1,000 points for the first 5 critiques.
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Peace Out Open in new Window. (E)
History of the peace sign
Peace Out
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Forsooth! - B2 or Not B2 Open in new Window. (E)
an actor must choose wisely
choose wisely
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Cracked Circle of Life PLEASE CRITIQUE  Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
Hello ! ready for a review/critique by someone!
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Cracked Circle of Life PLEASE CRITIQUE  Open in new Window. (ASR)
Some people cannot face the reality of death until first run through a filter. 1,718 wds
Please review = then let me know, is the creature real, what do you think Robert is experiencing? Any errors in POV, Show not tell, etc.
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The Firelight Honor Open in new Window. (E)
... the crowd murmured as firelight flashed on his knife blade ...
reopened to share as Veterans' day is approaching
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 You Gotta Be Kidding Open in new Window. (E)
Sarah receives a disturbing cellphone call from George.
not autobiographical, in case you wondered!
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