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[ Sandcastles ] is a very strong poem. I don't often rate and review publicly anymore but would easily give it a 4.8 just on first reading. The only hesitation I have is its length. Repetition is a strong poetic device but whether this nail needs to be pounded and pounded is my question. I tend to write and read short poems so my bias may be showing.

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