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Hey kids, I need proofreaders again!

I'm working on a new project starring Harper Black from Daven's Port, and I'd say that I'm about halfway done with the material. If you're interested in getting a sneak peek at the new story that'll take Bless Her Heart's place in the Weekly Release schedule, shoot me an e-mail.

WARNING it's especially NSFW, moreso than my other works. Keep that in mind when you're applying.
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When you say "proofreaders" do you mean people looking for grammar/spelling mistake, or people to critique the work?
An excellent question RocketJava ! Proofreaders have the burden of being both, I'm afraid! I'm specifically looking for people to read what I have so far for errors, yes, but also to see if they like what's going on in the story! I tend to send it out about the halfway point so that I have enough time to revise my plans going forward if I get a huge negative feedback over certain parts.
How do you apply?
Hello everyone, I've landed safely back in China! I'll be having a lot more free time to write for the next few days as my employers allow me to get back into the swing of things. Luckily for you, part of "the swing of things" is making time to write!

Here're three chapters that were posted to the suggestions list. Hopefully they're indicative of more to come!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1708920-Nikkis-Sweatpants-An-SSBBW...

^A small plot-steering follow-up to my previous additions to FGAL's Nikki story. They were received pretty well, and I'd like to get back to it!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Pipe...

^Pink-Lightning and I talk quite frequently about the state of the BCU and they pump me full of ideas for Piper's story. ENTER ADDICTIVE BREAKFAST SCENARIO.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2110993-Legends-of-Yndyre-A-WG-Fan...

^Another addition to a long string of my own chapters. This time, working towards the end of Olga's time in the Marshes!

As always, feel free to post suggestions as to where I should turn my attention to next. I like to look at new interactives too, guys! If you think a story has potential, or if there's a chapter thread you think I'd be a good fit for, send it my way!
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Great question namad !

I don't have a lot of problems writing about fictional characters. A lot of my earlier work is based in anime/comics and television shows! It's just that I haven't been piqued by anything recently. That being said, I don't particularly enjoy writing celebrity fiction. Writing about the character is all well and good for me, but I have a lot of trouble writing about the celebrities that portray those characters.

If you know of something that you think I'd be a good fit for, let me know!
Good to hear your trip back went smoothly!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1213992-Hesper/action/view/chapter...

Your addition's to the Nikki story is always great!
Halberd did a lot of good stuff with this but I guess it depends on if you like Overwatch.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1980289-Overwatch-Weight-Gain-Inte...

And, this isn't exactly a new interactive, but I feel like it doesn't get the attention it deserves.

Glad you made it back safely!
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Alright kiddos, I've posted a few suggestions from Write Night, posted last night!

An update to the original Buttercombe Academy interactive, and one of my favorite newer story threads starring Grace Sawyer

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...

An always-welcome update to the Piper Black interactive, continuing from where she moves in with Yanira

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Pipe...

As well as one starring Harper Black! Soon to be starring in her own long-term story on DeviantArt, so look out!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Pipe...

And a good three chapters of Office Fatty, continuing where Cass Morgan gets kicked off of her radio show, and has to join the Gordge Girls in their offices!

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1933610-Office-fatty/action/view/c...

I've got three days left in me before I leave back for China again, so I need to get back in the writing game! Keep sending new and interesting chapters that you think I'd be good for!
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Fcfa  


Here's a few chapters that I think could do with some love that are hopefully somewhat new suggestions.


In particular, you have admittedly piqued my interest with this newly added chapter! Would you be willing to continue it with either option?

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Pipe...



https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2110993-Legends-of-Yndyre-A-WG-Fan...



https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...



https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...



https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1708920-Nikkis-Sweatpants-An-SSBBW...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...



https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


Also, before I forget, in Buttercombe II, I'd like to suggest adding the security guard Rio to the faculty roster as an option. She seems pretty ripe for possibilities, and I quite liked that short bot you did with her a while ago for mix n match
Hey everyone! My computer back in the States is finally up and running! That means that I've got some time to write while I'm on vacation.

I'm working on a larger project starring Harper Black from "Packing on Pounds: the Piper Black Story [E] but that won't be ready until after my vacation is over. In the meantime, I'm looking for things to write! Send me storylines that need some love and I'll see what I can do to crank out a few chapters during my last week in the states before I head back to China!
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I really like this story, but no one updates it anymore, so if you have the time check it out.
https://www.writing.com/view/1667310
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Season's greetings!

I'm gonna throw out one last write night before the end of the decade! Post some chapters from threads that you think need some love and I'll do my best to get to them before 2020.

Post as many as you think you'd like to see! My portfolio, your own, or someone else's - it's all fair game. Just make sure to post AT LEAST 2 in your comment
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https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1943345-The-Jock-and-the-Cheerlead...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1943345-The-Jock-and-the-Cheerlead...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1943345-The-Jock-and-the-Cheerlead...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2091444-Young--Hungry-the-Zack-and...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/885928-Television-Women-expand/map...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1737979-Female-Weight-Gain-Stories...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1737979-Female-Weight-Gain-Stories...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1697415-NBC-ABC-weight-gain/map/11...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1697415-NBC-ABC-weight-gain/map/14...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1765815-Girls-Weight-Gain/map/1321...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1329347-Futurama-Weight-Gain-Story...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1329347-Futurama-Weight-Gain-Story...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1710694-Family-Guy-The-Outgrowing/...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1710694-Family-Guy-The-Outgrowing/...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1710694-Family-Guy-The-Outgrowing/...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1710694-Family-Guy-The-Outgrowing/...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1828361-American-Dad-Heavy-Days-Go...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1828361-American-Dad-Heavy-Days-Go...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1828361-American-Dad-Heavy-Days-Go...
Fcfa  
Happy New Year everyone!

Thanks for doing this Bobo.

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2072923-Davens-Port/map/1251311213...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1819934-Alice-the-Fat-Cheerleader/...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2110993-Legends-of-Yndyre-A-WG-Fan...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2110993-Legends-of-Yndyre-A-WG-Fan...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1856959-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2072923-Davens-Port/map/152222222


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2185965-Marvels-Spider-Man-Female-...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2041198-Super-Sized-the-Mel-Carlyl...

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2141026-Packing-on-Pounds-the-Pipe...


https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...


Hey kids, here's an update on my writing scene so far!

Chapter 3   of the Bless Her Heart series is up! This is a weekly series that will be updated for the next six Fridays before it's over. But if you want to read it all now, plus get some neato extras, paypal me $5 at this link https://paypal.me/bobowrites

Also posted on DeviantArt is my story Little   which, no pun intended, has gotten much bigger than I anticipated. It might be worth a read!

We've got an Office Fatty chapter posted here called Cass the Gordge Girl   centered around a storyline I've been wanting to work on for a while now, where Cass Morgan, fitness junkie radio starlet, becomes a chair-squashing office drone! Anyone whose been reading OF since the beginning knows my love for Cass and Marni!

Then there's Parker Black, the Big Fat Nerd   from Packing on the Pounds, another story which I've been wanting to do for a while!

For those who don't have it followed (shame on you!) Buttercombe Academy II got an update from me and the ever-talented Dr. Faustus in the Rachel Conrad storyline. The update starts here with Perfect Day for a Picnic  . The first two are mine, and the last one is his! Better watch this one, folks!

Last but not least, there's the Scarlet Weight Watch story I've been kicking around with WritingInTheVoid ! It's been updated a lot since I plugged it last. If you like comic books and weight gain stories, this one's for you! The earliest chapter since its been plugged in my newsfeed is here   but you're gonna want to go back and catch up!

I'm going to try and get some writing done tonight! If you have any suggestions, or want to work on a collaboration in the coming weeks, send me an e-mail! Also, feel free to add to any of the interactive links posted above!
Hey kids, Chapter 2 of Bless Her Heart is up!



If you haven't already, go check out this new story! I'll be updating it weekly for free. OR you can buy it in its entirety here  , plus 3 short stories and a What If? chapter based around the main story, all for 5 bucks! All of the money helps keep my lights on back in America while I'm overseas.

Here's hoping that you like it!
Hey kids, my schedule should be clearing up soon. Send me some interactive stories that need some love!

I'll try to get to a few of them before next week is out.

You know the rules- one of mine, one of someone else's
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FINALLY returned to this one myself so little bit of drawing your attention to it and a little bit eagerly waiting to see if you have more to add:

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1852646-Marvel-Comics-Female-Weigh...

And another in the vein of self serving with one of my lines in the ever wonderful Buttercombe II:

https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/2171199-Buttercombe-Academy-for-Gr...
Hey kids! This is what I've been killing myself over. Lots of people helped proofread this, I screened for plenty of ideas... lots of spoons went in this pot to make sure it was as good as it could get!



This is the first part of a weekly series that will update every Friday for the next two months. There are nine parts total, all already written and ready to go.

"But Bobo" you might say, "I don't want to wait eight weeks to read it all!"

And that's what I was hoping you might say!

I'm running a special hustle with this one. You're GOING to get the whole story, free of charge. You're just gonna have to wait for it. BUT if you want to read it all now Now NOW (gotta love instant gratification) then you can slip me five dollars at the link below:



It's only five bucks (less than a Venti Pumpkin Spice Latte) and it'd really help me out! Getting money in and out of China is a lot of trouble, and I've got bills back in America to pay. Having a cushion would mean a lot less stress on me.

Not to mention, you get all kinds of stuff to go with it! Not only does your purchase get you the story in its entirety in a polished PDF format, but you also get 3 unconnected short stories (Blue Plate Specials) and a special What If? chapter based around the main story. So that's like, fifteen pages of bonus content! Thirty-three cents a page doesn't sound too bad!

Anyway, I appreciate whatever you can give, even if it's just your attention. Whether you can afford the five bucks or not, I want everyone to be able to read this thing!

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You're cracking me up! I love your hustle! *Heart*
I bought it. Some of your best work.
I NEED PROOFREADERS!

I've got about fifty pages of weight-gainy goodness written up and it's in need of some hammering out! I'm picking about three people to take a look and give me some advice before it hits the presses and gets published.

Shoot me an e-mail if you're interested! It's first come first serve! P L U S, all of my proofreaders get FREE copies of the finished product. A N D the bonus features that come with the premium edition later on.

So... you know... shoot me an e-mail! I need feedback!
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What's it about?
I can give it a shot. My spellcheck is in British English and might pop up with different results.
Remember that Overfed Mom Society idea I floated a while back?

Well, I've turned literally all of my manic energy into laying the groundwork for a tweaked version of that project. And now that I'm slowing down a bit on it, I think it's about the time to ask for some help/feedback on moving forward.

If you're interested in reading about 12 pages of setup spread over two "parts", hit me up.
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Sounds good! Would love to read it!
I'll give her a read!
I'd be down if you are still accepting people
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I asked, you guys spoke—no new interactives.

Then I asked again, and you made it clear—no, 7's enough.

That's fair! I understand. More than eight years and 4000+ chapters between all of them is a lot to take in. Not to mention all of the supplementary materials like the mix and match games and my dA stuff. I got to where I am today with the help of some great writers and a lot of fun characters, but also by having a lot of great readers who provide feedback. I guess the price to pay for helping to create and facilitating such a big web of stories is that, while things might get dull for me, it's hard to actually step outside of that web.

Gotta love that spooky spider simile, just in time for spoopy season.

Thanks kids, and Happy Halloween. *ThumbsupL*
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You know, I get that feeling a lot, Bobo. I sometimes feel like I paint myself into a corner for certain types of characters, genres, and even stories. When I create big projects, that becomes my whole world, and it's hard to get out of that.

Have you thought about short stories, though? I find that it's nice, every once in a while to take a break from the big projects and just do a quick story (2000 to maybe 5000 words) in a new area. It gives me the taste of something new to work with, but I can still keep working on the big projects that readers like. It's a nice brain break every so often. I know it's not the same as creating a whole new interactive with a whole new world, but it's something to think about. I know the mix and match stories are technically in the realm of short stories or even drabbles, but I'd say short bits here or there in new ideas can't hurt if it's "new" you're after.
Bobo is drunk and thinking about starting a new interactive, and therefore establishing a new corner of the BCU. But Bobo is apprehensive about such an undertaking, given the less-than-stellar reception/execution of certain interactives (cough-cough Valentine) while also feeling the urge to write for something new.

If I did wind up hosting a new story, it'd be more or less brand new, with few/little/no ties to the pre-established lore. That way we could start fresh, with new characters and whatnot, and then slowly tie our way back to the BCU organically.

Either tell me what you'd like to see or talk me out of it, because my salivation for new ideas and desire to bring in entire sheets of characters is distracting me from getting any other writing done.

I repeat, potential new interactive incoming, if this isn't just Bobo being drunk and flustering
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Mmm..., Something completely new defenetely is a interesting notion. But i would imagine it is a huge undertaking. Whatever you decide to do or come up with i'm sure it's gonna be good stuff.
I say f*** it, do whatever the hell you want.
No one can stop you
I think the best idea is either pick a popular character in your previous works and give them a starring role or pick a "location" which allows a decently sized cast and leave room for weight gain. Or a mix of both, of course.

For the first option, I'd suggest, for instance, a character for Buttercombe II, like "Rachel Conrad's investigative life" which stars a Rachel after being a teacher for a while (or who has never been one if you want her to start slim) investigating different but all fattening cases. Or something similar starring Gia, who has never been shown so far, except in the mix and match game.

For the "location with sized cast" option, an idea could be a family, but there's already Piper's family, or a workplace such as an office, the Yeng company (though I think this one would be too easy) or I think the best idea could a restaurant/pizzeria/burgeria/whateveria, since it allows a very large cast with workers and customers, and is an ideal environment for weight gain

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Oh boy, it's almost Halloween! We've already had the "trick" part of trick or treat thanks to the special Halloween Round of Mix and Match, but I think it's time for a treat!

We're going to play a special version of the game called 'What If?' where, you guessed it, you post "what if" questions pertaining to characters and scenarios related to my stories. You can post as many "What Ifs" as you like in one comment! And I'll go through and pick the best ones (anywhere from 3 to 5) and write up 500 word short stories as we did here   in the previous game.

NO LAZY QUESTIONS! "What if x wanted to get fat" "what if x roomed with Hannah Hammond" "what if x workd with Yeng" and so on aren't likely to be picked! The more interesting I find the question, the more likely I am to choose it!

Go ahead and get your questions posted! I want to knock this out before Halloween!
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What if Polluck had to make an honest effort of trimming down her students?

What if Hillary Heart needed help with her comeback tour?

What if Mel came home to discover she was the lightweight of her family?
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What if Piper Black became a vampire that lived by sucking the fat from others?

What if Mia Underwood ended up becoming the headmistress instead of Polluck?

What if Yeng was just a restaurant instead of some massive corporation?
--What if Kritsana Boonliang bought Yeng, for better or worse for the company's modus operandi? (Whether she changed the direction of the company, or kept to the fattening food productions).

--What if Tetsuo Yeng one day announced, completely out of the blue, that Yeng is shutting down? What level of impact would that have?

--What if the Carlyles were a gymnast family, with Mel and Alice having both participated in Olympic contests?
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